Thursday, December 9, 2010

The worst news article EVER

Albertville man charged with assault claims to be vampire - North Alabama News, Radar, Weather, Sports and Jobs-

Even tho the material covered in this article is very amusing, it is quite easily the worst news article I have ever read. The quotes are disgusting.... no one is going to take Det. Hooks seriously anymore after reading this... But that's not the worst part. The grammar, in and outside the quotes, is just atrocious. Commas and periods EVERWHERE!!! Now i'm no master journalist or anything, I've only taken a few classes at school.... but there's so many obvious mistakes and ways to fix this article to make it sound intelligent. Good grammar is a handy tool in life ;)

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